I heard waves crashing and someone kicking sand at someone.
I saw people surfing on their boards.
I felt hot sand on my feed and water on me.
I wondered if someone would give me a surfboard.
To Matthew, I like how you have added an adjective (describing word) to describe the sand because as a reader I know exactly how hot sand feels on your feet. I wonder if you could add some more detail to your I saw sentence. What did the people on the surfboards look like? From Mrs Head
To Matthew,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have added an adjective (describing word) to describe the sand because as a reader I know exactly how hot sand feels on your feet. I wonder if you could add some more detail to your I saw sentence. What did the people on the surfboards look like?
From Mrs Head
To Mrs Head
DeleteThey looked like they were like going to slip off the surfboard like about in 10 sec I think.
From Matthew